Lesson One
Hills Like White Elephants, feminist criticism
Feminism as applied to the short story of Ernest Hemingway

Strategies: Graphic Organizer
Reading
Writing
Discussion
Differentiation

Lesson Objectives: SWBAT
1) read both texts
2) understand the vocabulary presented in the expository text
3) relate the ideas from the expository text to the narrative text
4) complete the graphic organizer over the short story.

Performance Assessment: See Follow Up

Macrostructure: Expository, narrative

Materials: Graphic Organizer, texts:

Bressler, C. (2003). Literary criticism: An introduction to theory and practice, 3, 142-147, 153-156. New Jersey: Prentice Hall.

Scholes, R., Comley, N., Klaus, C., & Silverman, M. (1991). Elements of literature, 4, 374-377. New York: Oxford UP.

Readability: The readability level for the short story is a 1.6, but it has conceptual and psychological undertones that would be better understood at a much higher reading level. The readability for the expository text is a 9.9. It contains a few more difficult concepts and vocabulary words, and it is at an appropriate level for high school readers.

I. READINESS

a. MOTIVATION
: I will begin class by giving a few students different types of lenses/glasses (e.g. colored, binoculars, eye patch, etc.) and telling them to observe a certain section of the room. Then we will listen to the descriptions about what the students found in their particular section. Everyone should have seen things differently.

[Now after listening to those descriptions, someone briefly tell me why they think the descriptions were so different. (Because they each saw through different lenses, making each description a bit different.) Has something similar ever happend after reading a piece of literature - that you and someone else read the same exact poem or story, but you both had a completely different idea of what the author was trying to say? Well, some people can read the same text and interpret it completely differently because we, as readers, bring our own experiences to reading stories, making it possible to analyze the same story in many different ways. This is what we will be doing today – looking at the different ways to analyze text based off of searching for certain context clues for that particular mode of criticism. Our purpose-for-reading today will be to inform (expository), and reading for literary experience (narrative).]

b. TAPPING AND BUILDING BACKGROUND: [The criticism we will touch on today is feminism, but that will be discussed more as we read about theory in just a bit. First I would like to find out what you already know about the story, its background, or Hemingway as an author. Does anyone know about what time Hemingway was doing the majority of his writing? (around WWI?) Yes, Hemingway actually went to work as an ambulance driver in Italy during the war when he was only 18 years old. He was wounded during the war on duty as canteen boy and spent time in a hospital there. But it was after WWI that Hemingway, along with many other young people of the time, shifted their thinking. Many young adults saw the effects of the war, the devastation, the destruction, and simply the reality of life, and they wanted to escape the American role in the power struggle of the world. Hemingway himself went to Paris after the war to continue writing. This is what our two main characters today are considered: expatriates. They were against the war, disjointed from the ideals of the United States, and this feeling of being separated pushed them to leave the country and flee to Europe in search of a more bohemian, artistic, and ideal lifestyle.]

c . CONCEPT DEVELOPMENT AND VOCABULARY: Sexual politics: (the principles governing relationships between the sexes in literature; also, such relationships seen in terms of power). [Before we begin reading the expository text that we will refer back to during the next couple days, we first have to take a look at some vocabulary word. So to start off, what do you think of when you hear the words "sexual politics"? Let's dissect the two words to create a meaning: What constitutes politics? (laws, governing system, debates). Ok, so 'sexual' placed onto the word 'politics' as an adjective might mean what type of governing system or debate? (A male/female debate or struggle.) Right, so sexual politics here describes the struggle and the relationships between the sexes in literature; this also includes how such relationships are seen in terms of power.] This word will be used previous to the expository reading so that students can recognize it as they read silently and write any necessary notes in the margins as they go through the text. The words absinthe, anis, cervezas, and Ebro will be discussed contextually as we go through the narrative reading since they can be more easily understood through the context of the story.

e.g. [As we go through the text, I want you to have a sheet of paper out so that you can copy a few vocabulary words down in order to understand them as we are reading. I am going to give you the list of words now, and then we will stop occasionally to check if they are clearly understood through context or not. Here is the list: Anis, abinthe, cervezas, and Ebro.]

d . PURPOSE-FOR-READING
: [Today, as previously mentioned, we will be reading to be informed about feminist criticism and also for general literary experience with our short story. After we are finished with the short story, you should be able to fill out the chart about the characters’ core values (comparing/contrasting) and what keeps them from reaching a similar solution about the pregnancy based on what you have read thus far.]


II. SILENT READING(expository): At this time, students will read through the expository text first and insert questions, comments, or reflections while reading. This will be helpful to their understanding of both the expository and the narrative texts. Taking notes/organizing will be helpful for students as they read the narrative text as well.


III. DISCUSSION: Now the students will get into small groups in order to discuss the theory and the vocabulary that we went over prior to the reading. [I would like each member of the group to discuss general explanations of what feminist criticism means. Then would like you to discuss and record certain issues or context clues that a feminist critic might search out in a piece of literature, based on his/her feminist theory. You will be able to find this at the end of the text that we are using. I just want you to have a good idea of what you will be looking for when we read and critique our own short story.] Student will reconvene as a large group to share what they came up with in the small groups. From the suggestions, they will give their suggestions of what to look for in literature and these will be placed on an overhead for the whole class (by the teacher). They will later use this as a reminder of what to look for in the short story.

IV. SILENT READING (narrative): The students will read the narrative text once by themselves simply to get a good grasp of the basic storyline. If they wish to take any preemptive notes in the margins, that is completely fine. After they are finished, the students will re-read it individually now using the overhead as a guide to look for certain feminist issues that one might find in the text. [Are there certain overtones that are evident? Does the text use a certain language that a female writer might not have used?] When they have gone through and read it a second time, they will then get in different small groups to continue with the discussion section.

V. DISCUSSION: [I want you, in your groups, to discuss generally what you found in the text that could possibly be items that feminist critics would also have recognized based on the list we have already made of points to watch out for. You should be able to collaborate to fill in your own personal graphic organizer as you see fit, filling in the blanks around the drawings. Before diving into the g.o. please ask any questions that are unclear about filling it out or about the reading. If you think you need it, we can go over the first few sections on the board, just to start generating some ideas to get you started on your own. Be prepared to share your ideas as a large group once we are all finished.]

VI. DISCUSSION QUESTIONS: [What did you find to be each character’s main core values? (Expatriatism for both, strong family values or morals for the girl.) How did that shape how they saw the world? (It made the girl a bit more reluctant to agree with the American's point of view. It made him not understand where she was coming from.) What was the American thinking in his head? (I don't want a baby. I don't have time for a baby. She is a nice girl, but I am not ready for a family life.) What was the woman thinking in her heart? (I don't know if I can just get rid of something so easily. I don't feel right about this. Why is he so calm about it?) What can you name that might be placed in the “wall” between the two as a barrier? (Lack of communication. Differences in values, lifestyles, and morals. The general gender differences that make it difficult to understand the opposite sex.) What are some possible ways each person could adapt in order to start breaking down that wall? (One might just have to change to the point of view of the other. They might just have to try to communicate better in order to build a good relationship that allows them both to cooperate to find a solution.) How might one read this as a feminist piece? (Typical male response - not being understanding, putting pressure on the woman to perform something, dominating the decisions, taking such a serious situation lightly.) What evidence is there to suggest that? (The whole dialogue is full of miscommunication and word games that each one plays with the other.) Can you cite specific passages that could be construed as evidence of the woman’s feminism or the typical “male” reaction to such an issue (abortion) ("let the air in", "really a simple procedure")?]

VII. REREADING: : If they were not able to think of any specific sections that could be used as evidence to support the character of Jig’s personal reaction to the apparent problem, have students reread by skimming as a small group and come up with two or three passages that would be helpful in supporting this attitude.


VIII. FOLLOW-UP: [Finish the graphic organizers for tomorrow if you are not finished already. If you need any help findin some textual evidence or filling in the blanks, please do not hesitate to ask me. Then look back at the story we read for today, and decide whether or not the right decision was made based on your own personal viewpoint about the issue of abortion, answering this question: How might Jig be justified/not justified? Briefly explain your findings in a 1-2 page analysis over the reading. It can be done based on personal views of feminism, or it can be related to the other hard read about feminist criticism using the vocab.]


IX. DIFFERENTIATION: One possibility for making the activity different would be to manipulate the graphic organizer based on the students’ understanding of the information. Right now, I have it planned so that they would be following the model by filling in the necessary information on the g.o., but it would be easy to let them, based on the ideas and concepts that I would like them to recognize from the text, create their own graphic organizer. That way, the students will be allowed a bit more freedom of creativity while still maintaining the original important concepts.

Addtitional Resources: Graphic Organizer
Links: Hills Like White Elephants (online version)
Homepage: Feminism in the Short Story
Lesson One